Reviews for Luka & Shoe
Dances-With-Pen chapter 17 . 3/27/2008
Oh gosh, this a great story. Luka is just a dream, and you write him Shoe is just as wonderful. When I read this story, I just hear wonderful Coldplay-like music in the background. You should publish this.
noriepie chapter 17 . 3/27/2008
ready? YAY!
Izzey chapter 17 . 3/27/2008
omg! i loved the story/ please update asap
Pyrgus chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Yay. Im really digging this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I deffinatly just blew off an entire day to read this so I hope that the ending doesn't dissapoint.


can't wait for an update!

it's only castles burning chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
my favorite story on fp, hands down.

and i completely relate to Shoe's prude-yet-non-prude-y-ness

and luka is just delish

let's hope the alien that has invaded your brain is here to stay and you update soon!
Reenmister chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
love the story!

and ur illustractions are freakin SICK! Man i wish i could draw like that!
TheAngelEnigma chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
My Dear King Patch,

I really want to congratulate you on your excellent delivery of story. I must confess that the first few times I heard about L&S, I didn't even bother to check it out, instead assuming that any story written about so cliche a topic as friends falling in love had to be poorly done. (I have no idea why I did this, and I ought to know better-I have been proved wrong several times about my cliche pet peeve.) I only recently actually read the story, decided I loved it, and set it to my alerts. I was excited to get this chapter, and was delighted while I read it-cute romance makes my day bright! Thank you so very much for continuing to write this lovely tale.

But along with complimenting you on your delightful brainchild, I want to commend you for the way you handled the sex issue. Nothing frustrates me more than a good author who inserts a meaningless and rather abhorrent casual sexual affair into her otherwise well-written story. The fact that your female lead admits that she is hesitant about having sex, even though she is in love, and doesn't force herself to have it to please someone else, and that your male lead openly states that he would like to have sex with her but is so obviously not pushing her into anything she wouldn't like really touched me. Shoe is by no means acting a prude, and, looking at things the other way around, Luka is by no means acting 'un-masculinely' (Is there a word for that? I can't think of it at the moment!). Thank you for such a mature approach to the situation, and thank you once again for a wonderful story.

Awaiting the next chapter happily,

Riley Hunter chapter 17 . 3/26/2008

*ahem* good chappie! and update sonish
White Rose Blossom chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
w, cute chapter XD

Loved it!

katieee chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
I love this. And why thank you - even though I can't quite remember what I said. 8]

I hvae a feeling Natalie will be back to stir up some more trouble. And it makes me sad.

Everything is almost perfect.
dancingqueen927 chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Oh how lovely. What fun kissage!

I am SO impressed by the way you addressed the tpoic of sex. I don't think that Shoe's reluctance makes her prudish, I think it makes her responsible and mature and NORMAL. I don't think people really do just go ahead and jump into sex that fast. (Well, people do, I guess, but maybe not most people) I think that it's a big step in a relationship and in a relationship as meaningful as Luka and Shoe's, it needs to be something that is approached very carefully.

Although Luka's being so understanding and sweet and careful to make sure she's ready? SO sexy.
sincerely disregard chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Oy, I take what I thought was a short break from fictionpress to have a life and so much is waiting for me to read when I get back. Alas the break that was promted by a lovely boy who was very distracting and time consuming is now over by his breaking off with me, so reading these last two chapters has been some what bittersweet. Not to worry, it was not a bad break and in fairness his very distracting and time consuming-ness was also starting to cut into my school work which is no good. But yes, you really don't need me to ramble on about my life, so I'll stop and actually give you a review.

I love the character building of Cash. I also really want to thank you for not making sex a given or easy or somehow transiant of the love they share where they both preform like pornstars, yet it is also somehow beautiful (sorry, one of my pet peeves is unrealistic sex scenes so I really can just go on). But yes, lovely job here.
Hopelessly Clueless chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Somewhat funny, yet serious, with all the sex talk.

The grandma haunting bit was ! lol

Great job, can't wait for an update! :D
anneliese chapter 17 . 3/25/2008
oh, i have so much love for shoe. and shoe's thoughts. i like that she never stops thinking, because that is how real people are, or at least i am. sometimes i wish i could turn my brain off, but i just can't control it.

i am intrigued by shoe's anxiety, however i was certain it had something to do with jeremy. hm.

it is interesting to me that both in japan and europe shoe has two best friends. always a threesome. i had two best friends all through middle school, but three in high school was much more comfortable, because then no one was ever the odd one out. and no matter how hard one tries to avoid arguments, it's difficult to avoid picking a side when they happen, i think. even if it's just in your mind.

i really enjoy the pacing of your chapters. out of curiosity, do you have an idea how ong this story will be? i think i will be content for it never to end, so long as the chapters continue to conclude on a happy note. i really don't want to see (g)nat again, i fear her appearance can only cause mayhem.

i concur with one of the other reviewers: you should TOTALLY be nominated for a skow award. have you never been before? i find that completely stupefying!

as for my "name," anneliese was the german name i chose in my introductory german course. for some reason everyone had to take one, i guess to help instill the language in our brains somehow. i like it, too! i think it's rather pretty. :)

it was a lovely surprise to see such a speedy update, and i look forward to the next one!
scenezz chapter 17 . 3/25/2008
Great chapter. I liked how you dealt with the sex. I imagine it'd be slightly awkward to just up and get naked to do the nasty with your best friend, so I thought you wrote it realistically. Thanks for your support. I loved the chapter and can't wait to read more.
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