Reviews for The Apocalypse
iwantmidas chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
wow this was actually really horrific to envision! haha anyway I was wondering if can read my story and see if it is good enough to be added into the community? its called "life of a slayer" but you can give "the oblivion diaries" a shot too :) please and thank you
Writer65 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
The titule should be "Hell ascension", its a very good one-shot of the end of the world
fratervel chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Wow. It did seem like a prophecy to me...but isn't that a bit against the way the Revelations described it? Just curious.
888888 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Wow. No beating about the bush there.

Short but effective.

Dreadful times, eh!

Madam Vendetta chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Nice. XD

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Well written piece. It gave me shivers.

~Twilight Starr~
Ms. Poe chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Whoa. Very interesting view on the end of the world. Wonderful description. I do wish you would continue writing, though. It would be very interesting to see what happens after the Apocalypse.

Happy writing

haha-no chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
happy. now, these are the kind of guys i would like to have tea with! but would the water really be pink from the blood? i know that the only reason that water is blue is from reflection, but would that effect the tints of red from the blood at all? very descriptave. i like it!
DisturbedKittenWriter chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Wow! This is a very powerful story. The description is beautiful. Excellent job :)
Saleinaenachiya chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
wow...what can i say great discription, i love how you used the sun metaphor. Continue writing, i would love to see what happens in this hellish world.