Reviews for Crushed Stars & Cigarettes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You totally should have developed this into a longer story. I would LOVE this to be turned into something about the two kids. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAHAHA morbidness! Me like! It would definetly make a good scene in a horror fairy tale kind of story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh. my. god. beautiful and creepy. i would have freaked out if i'd dreamed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! such vivid imagery. really well described. great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sympathize. The day before our finals, I had a dream I was this little robin living in a tree outside my bedroom window... And then a hawk ate me on the driveway. 0. Quite ovbiously not as well written or as emotion inducing as your piece, though. Well written. |