|Reviews for Jade|
| Sanareth chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Good, however the end is somewhat shaky. Also, alas you've somehow copied a section twice. I think after she sells the 'lord of the rings' book you've pasted an earlier section over the end.
PS: Thanks for reviewing Gateway, I checked, saw the errors, made the changes. Never would have noticed them otherwise.
| MidNight The Magnificent chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Damn. This brings back really REALLY bad memories of my falling into a coma myself(had a STROKE due to this inborn abnormality in my brain.) when I was sixteen. When I woke up, I'd lost SIX months of my life! Can you imagine? Maybe not as bad as six years, but it still left me cursing at the unfairness of it.
Nice story. I mostly found stories without too much dialogue to be boring, but this one was great. Maybe because in a way, it's so "personal" to my own experiences.