That was a wonderful story

I really enjoyed that story. It had a lot of fun and creative ideas in it. I hope more of your stories will be as great. _

kudos for you! it was an awesome story! angsty, violent, and everybody that i wanted to kill myself with slow and daunting torture died anyway. what more can anyone ask for? that's right nothing. i hope you and your muse come up with more things like this because, well, this rocks. cya on the flip side.

peace.

Wonderful story! I loved it. The Epilogue was somewhat sad because it was a funeral but all in all the story had a happy ending. Once again, wonderful story!

I hope they'll be okay! Please update!

AH! someone get a doctor! Azazel can't die! ...but then again, I'm probablly over reacting anyway. -_-; typical huh? yup. I hope they don't go through too much pain. cuz I actually like these characters.

peace.

Did you make up that language or is it an actual language? I liked this chapter too, poor Toby, bad stuff keeps happening to him. He can't even get some decent blood. And Hara finally comes into the story, that should be interesting.

Wow, Adrian reminds me more and more of Bressa... I love the fact that you took a jab at the elves from lotr, it made me laugh out loud (although fans of the movies won't appreciate it quite as much). I love the flashcards too.

That was a great chapter! I love the interaction between Toby and the king and Adrian is just as much of a flake as ever. No errors either, good job.

I'm only on 16 but this is a great story! I'm rooting for Toby to find some type of happiness in the end. He deserves it.

He's a vamp? oh

I'm interested...but confused o.o most confused. _ please update soon!

ooh, back story next chapter? can't wait!

descriptive, although graphically so at times. toby's such a good guy, helping hara and all. i would have just thrown up.

YAY SHE'S GONE! *does insane happy dance* just watching her fall down the cilff in my head makes me smile. i think i'll do it again...

peace.