Reviews for i am a fool
finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
i swear i stand up & clap. fucking beautiful. so much reminisces in here. you sort of linger at the end with the line "she doesn't realize that she kills me each day". so much sadness. you conveyed emotions so well that i could almost feel as broken as you appear to be in here. l.o.v.e.l.y
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Great work. What else to say? I think I have said all the things I am thinking at the moment into pervious reveiws chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
This reminds me of something that happened with a friend and me the other day.