Reviews for Just Listen
musicwriter2b chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
sometimes i feel the same way. you know, everyone talks and doesnt shut up (ok i do that too) and sometimes u just want to talk and have people listen to you. although, usually when i talk, only 1 out of every 4 is actually listening to half of what im saying. that might have to do with the fact that i only talk about 3 things: music, writing, and ...ok josh. but still. i need something new to talk about. not that music or writing will ever be u thought of what you're going to do later in life? because if you keep this poetry up, man you could seriously be a great poet. i know you love writing, so hey, that wouldn't be such a bad idea, but im not here to make decisions for you. it's your life. i just want to hear about it. if u ever just want to vent, i'll listen. i
sailor neptune chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
mmh. i like the simile "like a bundle of sticks trying to start a fire to warm up my frostbitten life". *hug*
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Excellent poem, well done! Write on! _

Anna
Gatha chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
You know, you should make up your own conversations in your head to get rid of your negative feelings, especially if there's no one there to listen.

I've been finding the same thing lately as well. When I need to talk to someone there's no one who would give me the ear, support, or advice I need so I have to think things through myself. It can really help you to put your life into perspective.

I like your poems. They really get me thinking and looking at myself.