|Reviews for Stars|
| Just Visiting chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
That's really quite pretty and well-written. I think you should continue it - it would make for a really great story, even if you didn't want him to escape. You could go back to the beginning and tell how he got there, tell about the betrayal of his parents and then, if you wanted to (though it would probably make me cry or something) kill him. That way, your lovely last line would not lose its meaning.