|Reviews for Lonliness fostered in a hospital cafeteria|
| lordelfy chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
this poem is so sweet, but sad...it could almost be made into a song..great job
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
so sad and beautiful.. I especially love those last two lines
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Devastating! I have a memory like this, where I’m a kid and with my father in a hospital bed. He had a series of seizures when I was twelve and was in the hospital for nearly a month. I can tell that you’re looking on this scene with a mature voice, you older still seeing the look in his eyes with the gummy bears. Amazing piece, I really fell into your story. I could relate to your past as well as mine. Keep up the good work.