|Reviews for Bleed Upon the Pages|
| eldrin chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I love the statemeant "I turn to the pages/Where my pen/Lets me bleed". Vivid imagery...a nice poem.
| finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
i love the story this tells. "no rivers of crimson red yet still the world cuts me with words and past regrets" it somehow tells of something that was lost.
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Wauw Hawke. This is one of your best if you ask me. Very, very good job, a beautiful poem.
Much love, Rosanna.
| deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
The ending did not seem to flow as well as everything else for me. It was deep and beautiful still.
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Reminds me of my "Writer's Suicide". Love it! :) Glad to see you posting, hope you're doing okay! *hug*
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Morning. Very well descibed and well depicted. I can see these things happening in my head. Words were used effectively and quite strongly. Keep up the great work and good job!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Ink stains my handsMy tears stain the pages-I think that’s the life of a writer (in a nutshell) right there!
When I feel the painFrom wounds blind to the eyeI turn to the pagesWhere my penLets me bleed-I love the devastating beauty of this; I can relate to it so much (maybe too much for my own good) but I really loved and enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Nice work! _ I like it lots. Write on!