Reviews for Hold Back
karone-sakura chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
I know how this feels... I do it to my family. I show you guys more then I do most. well loved it hon!
Miki2489 chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Wow. THis poem describes how I am around most people the excpetion being my family, at least my mom's side anyways. This is a great poem. Keep up the good work.
Tatsu the Blade Star chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
I feel like this all too often. Internalise pain and stress, and try to present only a strong face to the world, when all you really want to do is curl up and cry, or just simply walk away.

But then, if you think like me, then you know that isn't what heroes do. And the world really does need heroes now and again.

Hang in there. It gets better.

Later...
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Heartfelt and true emotion. Well written.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
you know the second stanza i swear is exactly what i was telling myself on the way home. i can relate to this. great job.