| Reviews for my skin |
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   do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 8/7/2006 beautiful imagery and a thought provoking idea. this is a little belated (understatement), but i'm certain you'll have no trouble getting published. your work is brilliant. |
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 Lovely, and good luck with publishing! |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006 creepy and well done.. I love the whoel out of skin thing... its creepy and cool |
| addie pray chapter 1 . 2/19/2006 Gorgeous. Much luck to you with the publishing. |
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/26/2006 breathtaking. it's amazing how i can almost feel and see exacty you're writing. "dandelion breath" is beautiful. |
| Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 1/25/2006 lovely imagery...I like the "estranged citizens/i'll never have the privilege to meet"the second line starts with a comma, is that a typo from the first line?I can't quite think of a literal meaning for "my skin will sail on without me/fluttering, flying, alone." I'm trying to think what you mean by your skin peeling off you and leaving you...maybe dead skin, but that would be the same free idea... I like "dandelion breath"- like when you blow on dandelions to skatter the seeds... |
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 1/25/2006 I love this, flowy and yet the idea makes me tingle. |
| BJ Worth chapter 1 . 1/25/2006 So beautiful and gruesome. Very well described. Nice writing. |
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/25/2006 Heh, dandelion breath is a pretty way of putting it. I like how it jumps from thought to thought, but is still poetically put. Good job |