Totally and copmletely beautiful. Leaves you with a good aftertaste. Keep it up!

Very real and very descriptive. Good job.

I wanted tos ay thnak you for your reviews. They are much appreciated.

I know how this feels. It's human nature, I feel, to think that everyone is going against you. However there is that other saying proving to be contrary: that people are far more concenred with themselves than they are with you. I like this poem because it's easy to relate to.

Choco