|Reviews for Regret, Anguish, Disguise|
| heather chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
i remember thisit made me realize what i had lostand what i wanted back...
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
wow. The truth of shattered dreams. The snatching away of a good feeling. That is what I read here. This was another well written poem.
the Stranger in the moonlight.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
"No sunlight can scratch the surface of my so-called sky.
Confined in these hollow breaths; sorrow laughs at me,
And cuts my wings in mid-flight.
So I come crashing down to a stark reality; I’m alone."
I'm in awe. This is simply beautiful. The ending line is perfect. This is a gem among treasure! No wait, it is the treasure! This is amazing.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Fantastic. You've incorporated such vivid imagery in this, especially the first line.