great story so far, hope another chapter appears soon

Awww how cute :) but kinda unrealistic, like howd vanessa get her number? Oh well I'll go along with it, it's adorable :)

Your story is cute, I like the Vanessa character. Might want to throw some tension in the story though. Where is the drama that's going to keep the reader hooked on your story? Also the text messaging is, like I mentioned earlier, very cute. Only problem is that I few times I was confused on who was sending what message, just something to think about.

oh thats cute update soon!

Nice start.

This story sounds promising; I like the characters although I don't know much about them yet. It sounds like a sweet story, and not too unrealistic.

hey i was reading your story and it sounds good so far not that its a bad thing but is diana a lesbian i just want a clarification

this is a great beginning, very promising stuff. keep it coming.