Reviews for Left behind
Bong2 chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Sad poem but great in its art. Keep Writing!
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Wow. Love the metaphor in this. Simple, but beautifully done.

Hawke
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
I like this.. so sad and well done.. beautiful metaphor for someone abandoning you.. it's cool bc it can apply to a lot of situations... ncie job
Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Aww this is sad...i like it...the idea of you loving someone so much and them just looking out for themself while you lie there, sprit (and body) broken. This is a good one...keep writng forever and always...

Jessica
miss.aishaj chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Wow babe. Very deep. Definitely a goodie.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
OMG...very powerful and its so sad, i love it though, i can relate big time, well done this is GREAT!
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
This is so beautiful and amazing, i absoulutely love this piece, not a single flaw, excellent job!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
This is really good! Very powerful and the imagery is really strong. Great work! QueenVixta
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
t is a very nice poem, but your lines are broken kind of strangely in this poem. Anyways, nice poem! :)
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
this is so sad. i love the chorus-y bit. great piece.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
aw such a good poem. but the guy is definatyl a jerk. ]