Reviews for Ashamed in D Major |
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![]() ![]() ![]() One minor error: Line 9, really reality might be better. Other than that... quite brilliant. Rhyming scheme's good, and a good formatting style. Great job, keep writting and pursuing your dreams. |
![]() ![]() aww your poem is totally relateable! i def. know how you feel and how you feel is very important. There was subtle rhyming in this, which i liked, because it flowed nicely! Thanks for your wonderful reviews, and i hope you continue writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice...I can relate to this in a couple ways...well done! |