I like this poem. It's mysterious and powerful. That's a VERY good quality to have in poetry. Excellent job. I love the direction this piece went. Once again, excellent.

Comes across well as a delicate scene. You make fresh-original descriptions to get your theme across. Good work.

Wow, I love this poem. Just the simplicity of it, it is truly beautiful!

Thanks for the reveiw, I shall take what you said on board for my next poem.

cool ending. i luv the imagery and altho short, it fits well together. great job!

x~mez~x

amazing! love your descriptions; "spicy wind"...

keep it up!

Soft, harmonious...i like this. Very good! .