Reviews for In Progress
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
Damn good poem here, and I love that sudden finish. You've captured your subject perfectly.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I have a couple of new poems up that I'd love to hear your thoughts on. They are "Renaissance Shades" & "Winter Cried"
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Deep and quietly intriguing. Very well-written, I must say. :)