|Reviews for Hurting All The While|
| Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
that's life- don't you just feel like screaming in their faces once in a while though, instead of holding it all in? maybe i'm just insane, but every so often i get the urge to act depressed like i want to and go crazy- be hissing mad, scream at them all; the works. you should write a poem about that- you could pull it off nicely, based on what i've read you write.
you pulled this off nicely- at first i thought i had like de ja vu, then realized what you were doing, and it's a nice touch. touche (little accent mark over the e that i can't do on my keyboard)
| The enraged mage chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Its really depressing, but its good, keep up the great poetry work,,