| Reviews for Three Seconds Fate |
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   A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 2 . 12/3/2006 you know what? never mind. let's pretend the first review i sent doesnt exist, and i'll go and keep reading this... |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 1 . 12/3/2006 oh! this is REALLY cool... is it a oneshot, or is going to keep going? because i really, really love it, and it's a really neat idea. |
| moonlight.dream chapter 5 . 6/2/2006 I really like the plot of this story! Great job! |
| shards of me chapter 1 . 6/1/2006 wow. the beginning of this is so good. the idea is wonderful and the first chapter just kind of grabs you. this story is a little like mine - with the death and the afterlife and la di da. my name's carrie too :) only I'm not in middle school and I'm incredibly jealous that you're such an amazing writing. keep it up. |
| ink-sword chapter 5 . 5/31/2006 *sigh* It's so good, that I was extremely sad when I couldn't just go straight on the next chapter. :( Update soon! |
| ink-sword chapter 4 . 5/31/2006 Still really good, still completely addicted. yayness! |
| ink-sword chapter 2 . 5/31/2006 Yep. You write really well. The plot is well developed, and I am completely hooked. Keep up the good work. |
| ink-sword chapter 1 . 5/31/2006 Wow! This is extremely well written. I think I'm in love. You're very descriptive, and I really think that the way you presented your plot makes it plausible. Good job! |
| an unwanted accessory chapter 1 . 2/7/2006 Wow this story is really good. I wish somehow you could put some romance into it though. well keep writing! |
| Dezzy595 chapter 4 . 2/5/2006 damn, talk about being mean. not even a bitch desivers to die. anyways, keep going. cant wait till next chapter is up. |
| kelsi bones chapter 4 . 2/5/2006 I think the next character should be really quiet. She could die from something weird, like a tree falling on her. Avery misses the tree falling on her, so she gets really excited and starts to run. She runs so fast, she trips over a rock and cracks her spine, which ultimately leads to death. It ends with "Fuck." Aren't I sadistic? Katrina |
| JojoAnn chapter 4 . 2/4/2006 This is really good. Is Lillie's mom going with her to...where ever Avery goes when she dies? Will she find out that it was Avery and not Lillie?Update soon! |
| Dezzy595 chapter 3 . 2/4/2006 nice, i like the plot and the story line is very well written. And it flows. goodjob, |
| Ginzuishou chapter 3 . 2/4/2006 wow...I really like the idea behind this story _ pretty interesting! keep up the good work! |
| Dance of Destiny chapter 3 . 1/31/2006 Hm... I think you should make Lillie drastically different than Avery, to make it harder to adjust maybe. Just an idea... |