Reviews for Three Seconds Fate
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 2 . 12/3/2006
you know what? never mind.

let's pretend the first review i sent doesnt exist, and i'll go and keep reading this...
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
oh! this is REALLY cool...

is it a oneshot, or is going to keep going? because i really, really love it, and it's a really neat idea.
moonlight.dream chapter 5 . 6/2/2006
I really like the plot of this story! Great job!
shards of me chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
wow. the beginning of this is so good. the idea is wonderful and the first chapter just kind of grabs you. this story is a little like mine - with the death and the afterlife and la di da. my name's carrie too :)

only I'm not in middle school and I'm incredibly jealous that you're such an amazing writing. keep it up.
ink-sword chapter 5 . 5/31/2006
*sigh* It's so good, that I was extremely sad when I couldn't just go straight on the next chapter. :(

Update soon!
ink-sword chapter 4 . 5/31/2006
Still really good, still completely addicted. yayness!
ink-sword chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
Yep. You write really well. The plot is well developed, and I am completely hooked. Keep up the good work.
ink-sword chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Wow! This is extremely well written. I think I'm in love. You're very descriptive, and I really think that the way you presented your plot makes it plausible. Good job!
an unwanted accessory chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Wow this story is really good. I wish somehow you could put some romance into it though. well keep writing!
Dezzy595 chapter 4 . 2/5/2006
damn, talk about being mean. not even a bitch desivers to die. anyways, keep going. cant wait till next chapter is up.
kelsi bones chapter 4 . 2/5/2006
I think the next character should be really quiet. She could die from something weird, like a tree falling on her. Avery misses the tree falling on her, so she gets really excited and starts to run. She runs so fast, she trips over a rock and cracks her spine, which ultimately leads to death. It ends with "Fuck."

Aren't I sadistic?

JojoAnn chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
This is really good. Is Lillie's mom going with her to...where ever Avery goes when she dies? Will she find out that it was Avery and not Lillie?Update soon!
Dezzy595 chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
nice, i like the plot and the story line is very well written. And it flows. goodjob,
Ginzuishou chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
wow...I really like the idea behind this story _ pretty interesting! keep up the good work!
Dance of Destiny chapter 3 . 1/31/2006
Hm... I think you should make Lillie drastically different than Avery, to make it harder to adjust maybe.

Just an idea...
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