|Reviews for Three Seconds Fate|
| A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 2 . 12/3/2006
you know what? never mind.
let's pretend the first review i sent doesnt exist, and i'll go and keep reading this...
| A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
oh! this is REALLY cool...
is it a oneshot, or is going to keep going? because i really, really love it, and it's a really neat idea.
| moonlight.dream chapter 5 . 6/2/2006
I really like the plot of this story! Great job!
| shards of me chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
wow. the beginning of this is so good. the idea is wonderful and the first chapter just kind of grabs you. this story is a little like mine - with the death and the afterlife and la di da. my name's carrie too :)
only I'm not in middle school and I'm incredibly jealous that you're such an amazing writing. keep it up.
| ink-sword chapter 5 . 5/31/2006
*sigh* It's so good, that I was extremely sad when I couldn't just go straight on the next chapter. :(
| ink-sword chapter 4 . 5/31/2006
Still really good, still completely addicted. yayness!
| ink-sword chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
Yep. You write really well. The plot is well developed, and I am completely hooked. Keep up the good work.
| ink-sword chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Wow! This is extremely well written. I think I'm in love. You're very descriptive, and I really think that the way you presented your plot makes it plausible. Good job!
| an unwanted accessory chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Wow this story is really good. I wish somehow you could put some romance into it though. well keep writing!
| Dezzy595 chapter 4 . 2/5/2006
damn, talk about being mean. not even a bitch desivers to die. anyways, keep going. cant wait till next chapter is up.
| kelsi bones chapter 4 . 2/5/2006
I think the next character should be really quiet. She could die from something weird, like a tree falling on her. Avery misses the tree falling on her, so she gets really excited and starts to run. She runs so fast, she trips over a rock and cracks her spine, which ultimately leads to death. It ends with "Fuck."
Aren't I sadistic?
| JojoAnn chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
This is really good. Is Lillie's mom going with her to...where ever Avery goes when she dies? Will she find out that it was Avery and not Lillie?Update soon!
| Dezzy595 chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
nice, i like the plot and the story line is very well written. And it flows. goodjob,
| Ginzuishou chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
wow...I really like the idea behind this story _ pretty interesting! keep up the good work!
| Dance of Destiny chapter 3 . 1/31/2006
Hm... I think you should make Lillie drastically different than Avery, to make it harder to adjust maybe.
Just an idea...