amazing. Wow. Such awesome sadness. I love it

~dragonzz~

heh...I have to say that I claim this one to be my favorite, not that i don't like the others, I like this one the best. rhyming...I'll have to agree with the other reviewer. But, I'm not any better so i should say anything. Anyway, I love the poem! Great Job!

This is good. very powerful, It paints a picture in your mind, or it did in mine atleast. It started out rhyming then it started to stop? Not sure but it actually helped the poem. I enjoyed it :). Keep it up~!Nick!~