this is amazing

thank you for saying all the things i've wanted to say

and all the things that i feel right now

keep writing.

i love your poem. flows together very nicely!

This is really good. true and i'll keep reviewing ur stuff. Good Work, *cough* much better than mine *cough*

Well, this was very good, and i like it. The second verse (stanza) (seperation) w/e u wana call it was a lil rocky but the whole poem makes up for it. So like i said, very good very emotional and very true. keep it up i'll be sure to look for ur work