Haha, minced goat guts. Hmm wonder what kind of mischief she'll get in to with that!

I like it, the descriptions are wonderful and really add value to the plot.

I do like the ideo about this story and the characters seem promising...but like when does this take place and where because I know in the midevil days they wernt talking like that but if thats kinda what your doing onpurpose thats cool...yea i can see that this has potential keep writing...also please read and review my screenplay Slippin' thanks1

Juelz