|Reviews for Where in this brief|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
ah, lights and is beautiful
reminds me of a perfume i smelled today
| bleed gilead chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
so reminiscent of eecummings and the like- strong and wonderful use of words (and mixing words), transparent enough but so obscure.
| deleted1357 chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
Great imagery! I liked this part especially:
"seconds into never, reflectingthe shadow of an echo..."
Very creative. Keep up the good work, Moondog!