good chapter indeed. I like Kyla's boys; they are quite funny. This story has been consistently providing me with an upper level reading experience that is also even FUN to read. Keep up the good work. We may have learned early on where aden got his leg injury, but I could not find it again. Are we supposed to know that or is it going to go into the plot later?

*scream* Aw! I loved that chapter! Yay! The boys are back! I love the boys, they're funny. How many chapters are left? I don't want this great story to end! Love you guys!-Avey

Oh, this story is so brilliant! It is seriously amazing. They said "I love you." Kyla's boys made me laugh out loud. Great job, I can't wait for the next chapter.

wah! they're in love! aw... unfortunately, they are going back to the palace which means aden is slowly hobbling towards being drawn and quartered. hahap update soon!

Great chapter! I'm glad Aden was saved. Can't wait to see what is in store next.

This chapter was SO COOL! I'm glad that Thiery ran away like a beheaded chicken! he's a coward bastard that only acts all tough when he's surrounded by his minions. Although I predict that he'll bring some chaos up ahead, but, hey, where would the fun be without some havoc?

Now I get Kyla's way of talking... Viewing it from that perspective it makes perfect sense. It's like the persona she plays when she's at the court is the fake one, and the real one is the one she shows up to the rest of the people. She's a lovely character (nce you get past the "princess" thing!) lol

And AW! Aiden is starting to realize his feelings about Kyla! isn't that just sweet? I felt like hugging him when he realized that he was jealous! He should get a cookie for being so smart! lol

Until the next review!

well since im re-reading your story i figured it cant hurt to re-review it. I like the princess character...something about her naivety(sp?) is intriguing. man i mispelled alot of words in this review.

The grammar in speech is practically all correct now, apart from the fact that the tags all start with capital letters. If it follows a comma, question mark or exclamation mark, and it's a tag (he said, she mused, etc) then it starts with a small letter. So: "“Hungry?” He asked" should be: "“Hungry?” he asked."

The scrap of paper on the ground was a little convenient, although the ash was creative. ;)

"he couldn’t read" Oh, nice touch. Didn't think of that.

Nice realistic-ness with her actually finding some things about Thiery attractive, and him not being all bad. I like that. Very subtly done too. Kudos.

Aw... I think my heart just broke. Beautiful scene at the end. Somehow you got just the right mix of care and urgency and it was heartbreaking.

She better come back! *Cries* Gorgeous.

Keep writing and update soon! This is one of the best written and most entertaining stories I've read in quite a while! Don't let us down! :D

That last seen was heartbreakingly sweet...It made me tear up anyway...Aw...I'm really not very literate now...If I keep writing it'll just be a bunch of squeals, coos, giggles, and aws...

This was a really good chapter but the whole point was Kyla was getting hit on by this king cutthroat and then she escaped...I think you drew it out a little longer than necessary. I liked the part were Kyla wrote notes to Aden and then realized - he can't read.

Ok, I read all the chapters from the beginning to the end in two hours and a half, and I have to say that I'M ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH ADEN! ahahahaha! but, really, character development throughout the whole story is great, the pace of the events is exciting, and I just can't wait for the next chapter!

There is something that I'd like to point out, and that's Kyla's speech. She speaks in a rather informal way, and that doesn't fit with her role as a princess. It actually doesn't affect the plot and its development, but I think if kind of affects the characterization of the princess.

I think that you're really talented writers, and I hope to read an update really soon!

Until the next review!

It was very well-written. I definitely like the storyline :) I'm real curious as to how Aden will escape. Hope you'll update soon!

I like it! it has this medieval thing that makes it more interesting for I'd like you to add me to your update list, if it isn't a problem.

As for the story: the characters seem to be well developed, and I'm pretty sure Princess Kyla is not as empty headed as you want us to believe! XD

Yay! The chapter is finally out! It was worth the wait. Aw...that's so sweet how they finally said they loved each other!

Sweet, sweet, just simply fantastic! I have taken a liking into both Kyla and Aden. They have such different personalities, yet they're so wonderful all the same. Even though there was no adventure of the sorts in this chapter, it was still fun to read, especially with Kyla's wry sense of sarcasm. I usually never imagined princesses to be like her,but apparently, she's one of a kind ;) I find it cute how she just wants to get away from the palace and enjoy the outside world...though I wouldn't say that it's very enjoyable at this point x) Too caught up in the...um...Underworld lair.

Haha, and I always enjoyed Aden with his...overprotectiveness of Kyla, and he just wanted the best for her :) That's really sweet. He's such a guy. I was rather pretty shocked at the end when Kyla just suddenly went like 'I love you' to Aden. The signs were there since the very beginning, but I never expected things to happen so fast ;) Ah sweet love. Okay, I think I'm done for the day. Keep up the great work, and I do hope you update faster next time!