How sweet! Have to love when someone can write a non-depressing and well-written poem :) I have decided that this: (is my favorite part)

"The fast paced world rushes byAs fireworks light our once dim sky"

But I don't know why...haha

This is an awesome poem. It reads well, the rhyming feels natural, and it brings out the emotion of love very well. Ah, the beauty of love... It makes it painful to spend Valentines Day alone... Anyway, great job.