Reviews for Solace and Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice work. I think my fave. line was: Love can show us the way throughOr unknowingly it can mislead usKeep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This doesn't need to be rated M... Anyhow, this poem flowed pretty well. I like how this poem began describing what YOU can do for the other person, rather than what the other person does for you. It breaks the typical mold somewhat. I also liked how it acknowledged that some love misleads, but also that you have faith in yours. The last was very pretty. Another great poem. |