Reviews for Fake Smiles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've never been a fan of poetry, but this is fantastic and easy to relate to. You did an amazing job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smile. Powerful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! Really good you can feel the emotion in it. I found myself sadly noding while reading, theres not much i can relate to but i could to that and think many other people will be able to. great job keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, really beautiful. and sadly true. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great poem and I think you have a lot of potential. The feeling and emotion in this was great. I suggest not using couplets when you right. Take the first for lines, for example; you could switch them up and they still make sense: "No matter what they do/ Don't believe anything they say./ Don't allow emotions through/ THey don't care about you anyway." It makes it feel a bit more mature and it doesn't change the meaning or feeling of the poem. Please keep writing because this was great! ~Daughter of the Faeries |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is amazingly accurate. i can relate. this was a great poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel a strong and strange connection to this piece and you. It seems like i was meant to read this poem it made me cry. And i don't cry. i smile. so thank you i guess for making me cry. |