|Reviews for Fake Smiles|
| Brennaka chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I've never been a fan of poetry, but this is fantastic and easy to relate to. You did an amazing job.
| WEAK chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
| socks-lost chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
wow! Really good you can feel the emotion in it. I found myself sadly noding while reading, theres not much i can relate to but i could to that and think many other people will be able to. great job keep it up
| Lily Laurence chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Wow, really beautiful. and sadly true.
| The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
This is a great poem and I think you have a lot of potential. The feeling and emotion in this was great. I suggest not using couplets when you right. Take the first for lines, for example; you could switch them up and they still make sense: "No matter what they do/ Don't believe anything they say./ Don't allow emotions through/ THey don't care about you anyway." It makes it feel a bit more mature and it doesn't change the meaning or feeling of the poem. Please keep writing because this was great!
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| promisesarelies chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
wow. this is amazingly accurate. i can relate. this was a great poem!
| seasick chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
I feel a strong and strange connection to this piece and you. It seems like i was meant to read this poem it made me cry. And i don't cry. i smile. so thank you i guess for making me cry.