|Reviews for Fairytale|
| I Am Vast chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
It's good but...would you be really offended if I said it sounds a bit like one of those annoying e-mail forwards I get all the time? There are some nice lines but it's a bit too repetitive. Don't take me too seriously though. I'm not really too qaulified to give good criticism.
| Procrastinating Fairy chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Hm...what can I say...I liked this, but it's like...like...uh...it almost lacks in your voice. Meh, that's a personal problem. It almost sounds whiney, too, but maybe that's just me...I just got down whining at Scapegoat for her god damned cliffhanger...
Anyways. Other than me and my personal problems, I like it. Almost repeptitive, but I like it. And it's all true. That's why I love/hate fairy tails. I especially liked the last line, because let's face it, in real life, people always fall apart as soon as something goes wrong...(okay, I do too, but then I usually write a poem about it and I'm good)
| thepuppydog26 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Yeah, I kind of agree with you about how certain lines are nice, but it's kind of lacking something as a whole. it's very nice but...I'm not really sure, it's missing something. I like how the first and last lines link to each other, though )
| C. Hoogkamer chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
OOh gosh, I think that you should be extremely happy with this poem. It is GREAT! Very well thought out and every line is very meaningful. Oh mann, I don't know what else to say, therefore it's going on my favourites.
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006