|Reviews for if only you knew the half of it|
| justanotherdeadaccount chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Wow. You write so simply but the words flow elegantly and there's a deep sense of sadness, and a sort of pitying for the other person in this.
Don't let anyone bring you down, you are nothing sort of awesome. I love that you do give a damn, because too many people in this world don't.
Lovely poem. fave
| blackday chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Nothing I haven't told you before. Great flow, connections, and ideas. LOVE YOUR WRITING GOODNESS.
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
you have a beautiful pen name ) this is a really easy poem to relate to, & you've expressed some genuine, common questions in a nice perspective & tone. good job. & i wish people would hear you.