Reviews for Don't you see?
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
good on you for not writing something sappy & expected from that kind of summary. one typo: "We all loose" should be "We all lose..."

really nice, the tone & overall message of this poem.

~kait
nofaceme chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
This is so reflective. I loved the way you took the point of view from a different person than expected. I liked the ending also. Great work.