Reviews for Into The World
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
I love the ending since it was so unexpected. You have a delicate way of twisting words so they come out with a bang. Very strong beginning and end, keep writing.
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Your poetry's really simple and unpretentious, which is great.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Nice, I like the way its written. Well done. I think in the second last line you made a typo though. 'laughte' should be 'laughter' nothing big though. I loved the imagery. Nice work!