Reviews for Seasons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn it. You just broke my tea-scented heart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the way you transitioned from fables to pulp is just lovely. (what i mean to say is, it is all woven so lovely, and then it's cut down to a bleeding quick.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if there's words that can describe how breath-taking, vivid, raw, emotional, and heartbreaking this is. The only thing I think could really capture what it invoked with me is the stricken, "oh my god" expression I had on my face when I finished reading it. This is tragic, and amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this really... really moved me. You have great writing and a way with words. I look forward to reading more of your work! I would love opinions from a writer like you on some of my own work. It would really mean a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful and poignant and frightening all at once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is is beautiful the imagery was amazing and then ending was so unexpected |
![]() ![]() ![]() "it would pour down hard and cars would move maybe 2 or 3 inches for every/2 or 3 feet we walked." is so pretty. this whole thing seems sort of magical. the ending is beautiful. good job. respects, -ty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't feel well. i'm listening to "summer skin" by death cab for cutie as i'm reading this. i loved the two lines about the movie theaters. loved them. this made my stomach turn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...dear God. That was quite the unexpected ending. It gave me the chills. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah...that...was *ponders how to put it* a quick dagger-dose of reality. How tragic. But the imagery was so perfect. I loved the little couple. I can't say the ending came completely unexpected however, because as soon as I read the line "the unflattering sun outlined little patterns of cuts and bruises on his paling face" I knew something bad was going to happen. I love the irony of the very last line. Great piece - pulls the read in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit. happy ending? either way, this was nicely written even tho the ending came as a huge surprise. tho maybe a bit of me was doubting you. . . nicely done tho. tells a (nice?) interesting little story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! sad :[[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() this...hurts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jesus CHRIST. this is... unbelievable. the IMAGERY, it actually made me shiver, it was so Amelie-sugarsweet-desolate-childish-powerful-gorgeous it made me SHIVER, & i actually thought... well, the ending just made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Oh. . Beautiful.I love it. |