Reviews for Here I sit
GreenEyedFullofEnvy chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I like this, it's very real. Imperfections-I belive those are what makes a person a person.
Little Junkie chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
AAH WHO ARE YOU ? CREEPY STALKER! haha. I swear you wrote that poem about me!hehe naah that was good. just like me. of course there are little details that aren't me, but the whole is ME. hehe this was splendid.
Annabell Lee chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I like the innocence and generally happy feeling of this.
Nemonus chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Excellent! I mean sad, because most of us don't have it all (who couldn't read a fic with the word 'duddy' in the summary?) . I like the phrases "will forever obsess over your grammar." and "most of the tuition. " because I really empathize with them.
kayttea chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
true. love the last line, absolutly love it.
Mantis Matsuri chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
This is well-crafted and yet I think it would look so much better as the starter for a longer story.

The descriptions are perfect and sufficient and yet.
helpless-pretender chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
nice poem..keep writing...thanks for the reviews
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Oh, I like this. Nice use of long lines. I like the repetition. Sounds a lot like my life-with the exception of a boyfriend. lol.
Charmy chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
It's a nice poem. I like how you put that even though you're just a nerd, and just a girl, and stuff that you could complain about; you have it all.
MaskedDrifter chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Very good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up.
Lulu2606 chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
I liked the realness of this poem, its not one of those poems where you wonder if the poets trying too hard to make it seem 'from the heart'.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
This is so open and honest. It has a wonderful flow to it. The feelings and the introspection come through well in this. Good work.
pieces chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
Reminds me of last line is cool.A lot of people don't get that.
Shadow of Flow chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
i like this, its powerful...
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
i like this! very enjoyable to read. nice work! :D
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