Reviews for Here I sit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it's very real. Imperfections-I belive those are what makes a person a person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAH WHO ARE YOU ? CREEPY STALKER! haha. I swear you wrote that poem about me!hehe naah that was good. just like me. of course there are little details that aren't me, but the whole is ME. hehe this was splendid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the innocence and generally happy feeling of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! I mean sad, because most of us don't have it all (who couldn't read a fic with the word 'duddy' in the summary?) . I like the phrases "will forever obsess over your grammar." and "most of the tuition. " because I really empathize with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() true. love the last line, absolutly love it. |
![]() ![]() This is well-crafted and yet I think it would look so much better as the starter for a longer story. The descriptions are perfect and sufficient and yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice poem..keep writing...thanks for the reviews |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like this. Nice use of long lines. I like the repetition. Sounds a lot like my life-with the exception of a boyfriend. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a nice poem. I like how you put that even though you're just a nerd, and just a girl, and stuff that you could complain about; you have it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the realness of this poem, its not one of those poems where you wonder if the poets trying too hard to make it seem 'from the heart'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so open and honest. It has a wonderful flow to it. The feelings and the introspection come through well in this. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reminds me of last line is cool.A lot of people don't get that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this, its powerful... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this! very enjoyable to read. nice work! :D |