this would be an awesome bathroom wall poem. I liked it and perhaps I'll write in the stalls

Hahahahah. I love love love it. My favorite parts are:

"Your head is full of lint!"

and

"I’m only safe/While in the stalls"

TOO funny. I absolutely love it.

LMFAO- that was awesome, hilarious(sp) love it -Rubs

haha. "please just take the hint" dosent fit the tune perfectly.

Amusing, but I'll stand up for the guys and say it was kind of mean. I mean, unless he's dangerous or something, at least have the guts to tell him you're interested, or if he's playing coy, then just tell him his actions make you uncomfortable. If your song isn't from personal experience and you just made it up, then I find nothing wrong with it. Good work.

-Ket

Amusing lyrics.. ;D It made me laugh the very first time I've read it.. and want to read it again.. haha!

Keep it up! ;D

haha that's hilarious! very creative. thanks for stopping by my site.

Lol, I had tor ead this since you mentioned if it your profile ting (yes, I catually read it! for once.. lol) its funny, I know of a girl at my school who would love it. )

I like this, very clever and funny

ur like a flea? hehe nice! hey tx for ur review!

Very amusing, great job!

Ha ha! XD Even though it's high school humor, it is still very very funny. Very nice!

I love this! Humor is always good, like yummy-cupcakes-with-lots-of-icing good. Yeah, I know you funny! (Hooray for baby talk!) Yes, the song, it's awesome that you could make it work with the funny-ness and the tune and it still making sense, kind of the opposite of what I'm doing right now...~Winter~

that just made my day _

LOL! I could've used this one a while ago! Clever write and thanks for your review!