Reviews for The Ballad Of Sleeping
clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
wow. that's really awesome. so disjointed and... bursting. i can relate very much to the topic. "her moths hibernate" -great line, and fits nicely with what you've got going. i really, really love the first stanza. awesome work!
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Great vocabulary; interesting choices, too. You've got a nice style. :D
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I love it: it's so delicious!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Your word choice and placement are excellent, because most of the placement actually makes the reader stop to disect the words and phrases together. You have a unique style, as some of the connections of words and phrases that you put together are very original and unexpected. Good work.