Reviews for Going Down
kingfox chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
pretty good. you kept it classy. well as classy as a bl*wjob can be. lol. You could have gone a lot raunchier, but you kept it simple. i like that. 3.9 good but not considered great. peace i'm out.
Damned Dead Eyes chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Actually, no, I've never read a poem about a blowjob. But hey, this is a first, and I LOVE it! The images in my mind kinda turned me on, heh heh, good work!
Finney Raju chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Was this from personal experience?
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Wow, uh, very,...uh, vivid. Lol. Nicely written and very, very detailed. Nice work.
Gorgeous Courage chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Haha...I LOVE this poem. It's awesome! I just randomly searched "blowjob" and this is what I came up with. Good job!

~Randi