|Reviews for The Wyvern Wars|
| Gema J. Gall chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
I feel so bad you don't have any reviews for all your hard work so I'll get the ball rolling.
I must admit, everything addressed in this introduction is totally my cup of tea and the tension behind the words has me hooked. All you need is people flying and I'd say this is perfect ;) teasing, teasing.
This opening alone shows a great idea, a great world, great potential, and a great writing style. My only concern would be to ask that if you want all of this knowledge to be laid out so earlier in the piece or would you rather have it be more slowly revealed as the plot progresses? Anyways, best of all possible luck continuing this!