Reviews for Sweetness
multiples of six chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
I really like this poem, it's cute.. and I have definitely been in that position. My only criticism is the rhyming of "seductive" and "furtive." It doesn't seem to go, but I guess the last syllable is the same, anyway. Oh well, it's nice, and I like the last couplet especially. )
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
'bondage'? i dont think that goes with the rest of the poem. other than that, worded beautifully. nice job.