|Reviews for Streams of Consciousness|
| bleed gilead chapter 6 . 2/5/2006
i would think to split them up to six different submissions, because it's sort of difficult to wade through them like this. anyways. of all of them, i like the flow (well, it's a stream of consciousness, hm.), but the pacing seems a little too, um, fast? doesn't fit all that well. love the first one, how it ends (oh, it sounds so awesome, listen to solomon rant), second- sort of cliched but the ending's engaging (opens up a new aspect but too late), third is short and sweet and slightly cliched. forth, strong imagery and a strong sense of tone. five, love love the t's. six, such a strong sense of anger, of confusion, of bitterness. good work.