Excellent. I have nothing more to say about that one other than it is excellent.

Hi! Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'll definitely to take your advice...I just hope it works. Usually, I just kind of stick to one thing..but that's not good, now is it? Okay, well about this poem. It's cute. I love the last line in each stanza. It's either, "The very essence of a hero," or "He paid for what we owe." Good job. Oh yeah, and one more thing...what's a meter? You said I didn't really have much of a meter. I would totally take that into consideration if I know what it meant. Lol, I'm not exactly an expert in poetry. You can probably tell by now. Okay, later!