|Reviews for The body|
| Cougar Draven chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
You can review your own shit? Wow...I liked it.
| oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Nice poem but, why did you have to be so hard on yourself?
Keep up the good work.
| starlight 507 chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
| singitback chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Very well written. I enjoyed it.
| ii chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
It's been done before, but it's still a neat idea. The poem is pretty good. It has a nice flow. What I thought interrupted it was the lack of punctuation to guide the reader. I wasn't sure where some sentences stopped and others began. Here, for instance, "of a man torn to shreds / it looks like he was stabbed"... That might look better with a full stop at the end of "of a man torn to shreds". But maybe that's just me. :-)
| Saigishin 13 Hiyamoto chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
dude this poem sucked.. i hated it... LOL