Reviews for Red Night
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
the last stanza here is the best... I feel like you never really describe what you did to screw up the world and saying it could really enhance the imagery and emotion in this poem. This is well done.
panther-of-shadows chapter 1 . 1/20/2003 I would like to read the connected story...heh. I like it! Y'know, Legolas said something about how there was a battle when the sun set red. Interesting.
FyireChildesDream chapter 1 . 7/25/2001
...i added it to favorites...too zoned out to write review...hard's a try...nice! _
Tyraa Rane chapter 1 . 4/21/2001
Oooo...I like this, I like this a lot. I especially love the way you turned it into something hopeful in the last line...nice, very nice. Keep up the great work!
Peach chapter 1 . 3/27/2001
That was really original. I liked it. "Now they'll all be mad at me." Heh heh...
Battykat chapter 1 . 2/16/2001
like it. specially the way the last line admits that there's still hope. thank you. :)