Reviews for While The Moon Still Smiles
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
sweet and quiet. it ends perfectly.
Lady Glass chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Beautiful, I love it because of the imagery that comes to mind when you describe the moon. The moonbeams, reaching, silvery, in the night sky to outstretched hands, its a beautiful scene.

Much love,

Lady Glass
fairEtales chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
I love the metaphor...Very deep. It's amazing, hon. But, the only reason that I know what the bold part is for is because you told me. Otherwise, I wouldn't have gotten that it was supposed to be smiling.
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
hey, this is really good, it's so sweet and well written too. i loved it. awe well I've posted chapter six on Superficially Honest so go check it out if you will, it'll really make my day.
q is for quirks chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
the only thing that comes to mind is beautiful. very good poem.