Reviews for Tranquility
P.A.W.07 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Egh ... I didn't see that last line coming, especially with that title. XD chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Wow, the contrast in this poem is really shocking. I think it's fun that you started all three lines with an "A." I don't know if that was intentional, but I just thought it was fun. I really do love this. Amazing work. I think I'm favoriting you and this poem. Keep writing! :)
SilverRain1011 chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Kinda threw me a surprise at the ending. But I like that. I like to have an author surprise me at the end of a poem or story. It keeps the reader's attention. Bravo!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Another great contrast. Lures the reader in then drops the last line on them.
Samara-chan chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
HA! Surprise ending; a morbid, yet tranquil haiku. Love it!
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Oh...that lat line...nicely done. It really leaves me wanting more and sets my mind a spining.
ygg chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Nice one! Very haunting last line.. kinda reflects the yin and yang of life.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
dark, mysterious, I love it.

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Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
nicely done! i like it a lot!
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
lovely images created here, so pretty. Keep writing!