Reviews for Trapped
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
I'd like to see more of this, but its a great look into the pointlessness of hording all your possessions and having your life wasted. Good job.
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Wow, hoped you don't feel like this, but a good description of how a person feels trapped.
Niki Lemonade chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
i liked it. It was a well dictated example of wasted life. Bravo
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
great meaning in this but it can be developed even further good work

keep writing!