|Reviews for Sorrow|
| Edraith chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Interesting, i like the symbolism in "grey-haired" standing for death and "green-haired" which could stand for hope. Nice piece.
| lokita 4 lyfe chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
omg *sobs* your haiku is so true and sad at the same time. but don't worry I liked it! thanx for thinking my rhyming in the barney song was good, another person thought it DIDN'T rhyme and was all critsizing it and telling me how to write it... ah well shows how much they know.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Very good use of colors and it's implied relationship to age. good write.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
very heartfelt. the essence of haiku is truly captured. beautiful.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
different, but i like it.
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
hm. A bit abstract...I liked it.
| Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Interesting choice of words. Leaves me wondering. Very nice.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Ohh, that was really sad. I love how so little information is given but the reader can still make a little story out of it, and picture it. Nicely done. )
| Infection chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
this was really good.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
I like how you used hair color to give weight and personality to these characters. Keep up the good work.