O_O sounds like your first date if u had one! lol jk!

me like, yes. (oh god, i sound like an idiot) your writing is amazing for a first post and the title is gorgeous, so smile persephone-esque (it is a compliment, as she is the best) and...yeah, pretty. i love the "hands remove the nervous sweat that had been ruminating on them forever" i don't know why but i found this line quite cute, very romantic in my odd way of apreciating it. my only complaint would be the use of their/his/her/their in the begining of every line, it just turned me off and it is more personal taste then an actual critic. anyway, i liked it; there were some amazing and it is aparent that this is love. nicely done.

~* noelle