very well done, and i can see the Panic! influence here. the whole piece is excellent, and the alliterations in the title are awesome. just out of idle curiosity, how long have you been writing?

The first stanza was nearly as powerful as the rest of this piece, which is pretty damn good. I especially liked "Her story is disregarded with the fashionistas full of empty feelings, as they sit along the sidelines of the ballroom floor sipping champagne."

Question - what does your pen name mean? It reminds me of "Je suis la fille" which is "I am a girl," or "Je suis la fie" which is "I am trust." But I don't think fee is a word.

i did not know you had such a big vocabulary! lol really nice Tina! im proud of you! *sniff*

"False intentions and preconceived notions cloud proper judgement" found that so true and down-to-earth. beautiful. "Her memoirs are revived through the revolutionary tunes of the bohemians and courtesans traipsing on the street corner" 'memoirs' happens to be one of my favorite words (though i use it so little, a real shame) and that line is selfishly made my fav. for it. i love the imagery in this, though not a lot there is still enough to get a detailed mental image of who this woman is. it is really pretty, honestly; i just love every line, praticslly.

~* noelle